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Steampunk by Yuuza Steampunk by Yuuza
a drawing i made some time ago just didn't have the time to submit it
in case you're wondering, it is a guy. yup.
the paper is white, the notebook is with white paper, the rest is effects i did in Photoshop to not let this drawing look so dull ^^
yes, i am making a tutorial but you'll have to be patient about it ^^
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:icongorillafactor:
This is my first critique so I hope it's helpful! First off great line work you managed to get that spot on. Your composition is also working well, but I found that the darker color in the vest/jacket does draw you eye because it is a lot heavier than the rest of your drawing.

But it is minor thing as you have positioned the eye well and it is working well as a focal point. I would have also moved the clock hand on the right(characters left) to twelve o'clock that way it leads you into the composition instead of pointing out of it.

Another good point is the lighter green, bottom of the clock frame and the character together create a strong triangle composition which is also good, with regards to leading the viewers eye around the image, to the focal point, his face. It also helps create a sense of power for the character.

Other than that I think it's a great piece and a really well rendered piece!
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You've done a great job with the definition. Strong lines and alternation of thin the thick black lines as the outline give the image a clear definition. The cross-hatching and the highlighting of the folded cloth to show valleys and ridges in the fabric was very well done. The gleam of the sword and the metal armor provide a nice sense of 3-D in the knight. However, this isn't the same for the clock behind him. Although the gleam of the glass surface is realistic and adds to the picture's impact, and the definition of the clock itself is praise-worthy—especially the deliberate way the Roman numerals are placed—the pillars behind the clock are oddly flat. The drawing style makes it easy to see that the clock is in front of the pillars, but, especially on the left, despite the base showing sighs of roundness the actual pillar has little or no definition of shape.

However, this does not detract from the quality of the picture. The image is striking, and the title appropriate. Good job, and keep up the wonderful work.
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98inalu-X Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yuuza, I'm your newest fan. > <Loved this drawing.
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:iconkingdomheartsewy:
KingdomHeartsEWY Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Awesome :D
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:iconpereyga:
Pereyga Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The result looks really good. I like the shining effects.
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:iconbillynikoll:
BillyNikoll Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great!
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:iconcerealnovels:
cerealnovels Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014
Very cool. Love the detail!
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:iconmariesilva:
mariesilva Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow :D
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HanOneSail Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Saw this on tumblr or elsewhere before, didn't know who it was by until got a favorite from you.
Thanks and I really enjoy your art, there is a nice warm and smooth feeling to each drawing.
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ETHorrorGamer Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Very nice I like it
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:iconmadhur-goyal:
Madhur-Goyal Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice
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:iconkitan777:
Kitan777 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
Beautiful <3
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:icongokusongt:
GokusonGt Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
WoOoW
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:iconitichiro:
Itichiro Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic
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:icongalaxinfinity:
GalaxInfinity Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014
I am your fan *^*
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:iconbenaissa-bendaoud:
Benaissa-Bendaoud Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014   General Artist
beautiful work
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:iconchiarapi:
ChiaraPi Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so beautiful!!!
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:iconvividdreams13:
VividDreams13 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist
The tone in this is amazing!! And the detail is just wow.
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:iconzhenya-happy:
Zhenya-Happy Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
Wow! It is very cool:) (Smile) 
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:iconjosephseraph:
JosephSeraph Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Loooooooooooooovely! Reminds me slightly of Yoshida-sensei's art, which is a great thing for I adore his artwork.
My, your stuff is GORGEOUS, OMFG
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:iconzukopie:
zukopie Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful job!
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:iconikibrii:
Ikibrii Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would like to write a lot, but its just so stunning to look at your work - so ill just throw in some few comments, just to show you how lovly your art is <3
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XDTheSnivy Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jesus i would marry him XD
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WelPruvNothingToLose Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
great inking
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:iconmutuoffinland:
MutuOfFinland Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so BEAUTIFULL!! I love how detailed your work is! <^-^>
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:iconn1colle97:
N1colle97 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome!  I really like it!
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:iconerebhe:
Erebhe Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
A lovely piece! Steampunk forever! :heart:
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:iconjohnnyacorn:
Johnnyacorn Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice piece. the detail is well done and that clock! haha!
keep up the good work! :D
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:iconliren-oleander:
liren-oleander Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
MA
GNI
FI
QUE
:o <3
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:iconvalijka:
Valijka Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i like it. trully awesome !
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DeviousPSYCHOviciouS Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very cool ^^
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:iconhhunt48:
hhunt48 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Hey I am not qualified to be critic, but your art is amazing!
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:iconrakali:
Rakali Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely!
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:iconkatdesignstudio:
katdesignstudio Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014   General Artist
I love this!
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:icondragonartemia:
Dragonartemia Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful *.*
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:iconsadlymoon:
SadlyMoon Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
 i love this draw , amazing! ♥ ♥ 
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:iconiron-ghos:
iron-ghos Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014   Traditional Artist
AWESOME :iconyeahplz::icongoodjobplz::iconclappingplz:
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:iconsagemist23:
SageMist23 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
This is awesome! For some reason, it reminds me of Carmen Sandiego:) (Smile) 
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ChewbaccatheCookie Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist
Love this!
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:iconrunicartist:
runicartist Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job.
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:iconperfectfemboy:
PerfectFemboy Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Photographer
OMG I LOVE STEAMPUNK SO VERY MUCH!!!!
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:iconfanastyfinder:
fanastyfinder Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
he is so hot :iconcomputernosebleedplz:
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:iconliowayo:
Liowayo Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, I never knew how it is that some drawings look shiny and others dull, but I guess it was a software or a camera with good light. Great work
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:iconmisterjohn53:
misterjohn53 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Beautifully done.
This takes patients to get the values right.
Well done.
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:iconpie-chrstn:
pie-chrstn Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wrong category? should be in traditional art drawings
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
it's a photo, if you haven't noticed
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:iconpie-chrstn:
pie-chrstn Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
..but its a photo of your drawing. which is technically still a traditional drawing
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
but it's a photo so it should be in the photo category
when you will draw something and photograph it, go ahead and put it in whatever category you want and you won't see me complaining about it.
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:iconpie-chrstn:
pie-chrstn Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah whatever
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TinyWild Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
I do like the contrast between the black drawing and the touches of white!
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:icont0nkatsu:
t0nkatsu Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Really nice tonal values. Reminiscent of the Final Fantasy series. I'm diggin it.
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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