Alright, to start off let me just say that I LOVE this piece. You have done a nice job with the hair and the shading. The clothes are amazing, I can see the folds and how much work you put into this to make it look three dimensional and realistic. I can see every part of this has meaning and it looks like it has emotion behind it, it was not just made to be a piece of paper with some pretty scribbles on it. I have seen things like this before, but the way you demonstrate it is completely your own. In general this piece is amazing and I really look forward to seeing more like it.
In front of a so bloodish red, we only can have the eyes captured by this drawing. Maybe a little bit shocked too. One or two part of red help a lot to give some life in the way you drew it. Sadly, the contrast of the lines are at some place (hairs, left arm) not enough. It may be would for the hair, but doesn't seem so for the arm. It's a pity! Cause the gesture is there, we can feel the movement of a man who fell on the floor. One strange thing is the blazon with the bird who seemed to have the same texture as the clothing (it may not be metal) but which doesn't seem to move an inch. Some ameliorations should be done there. That's it: in a general way, it's a good drawing: the name is well-chosen, it's expressive and the place of the red is perfect. The losses of decor and of contrast by some places are the biggest problem. Really nice!
Wow this looks very amazing. I really like the color scheme and the bold red for the blood effect, now that's very neat. . Also The details are so smooth and detailed the subject just pops to life. Also I like the arrangement of the tools. This is really nice. Keep up the great work.