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Well this guy is about to kick the bucket :lol:
just a small sketch from my sketchbook :)
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Alright, to start off let me just say that I LOVE this piece. You have done a nice job with the hair and the shading. The clothes are amazing, I can see the folds and how much work you put into this to make it look three dimensional and realistic. I can see every part of this has meaning and it looks like it has emotion behind it, it was not just made to be a piece of paper with some pretty scribbles on it. I have seen things like this before, but the way you demonstrate it is completely your own. In general this piece is amazing and I really look forward to seeing more like it. :)
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In front of a so bloodish red, we only can have the eyes captured by this drawing. Maybe a little bit shocked too. One or two part of red help a lot to give some life in the way you drew it. Sadly, the contrast of the lines are at some place (hairs, left arm) not enough. It may be would for the hair, but doesn't seem so for the arm. It's a pity! Cause the gesture is there, we can feel the movement of a man who fell on the floor.
One strange thing is the blazon with the bird who seemed to have the same texture as the clothing (it may not be metal) but which doesn't seem to move an inch. Some ameliorations should be done there.
That's it: in a general way, it's a good drawing: the name is well-chosen, it's expressive and the place of the red is perfect. The losses of decor and of contrast by some places are the biggest problem. Really nice!
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bundyito Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
Simply like this cause of the color and the outlines sharper here and there. It shows you been playing with this instead of drawing it. Thumbs up
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Yuuza Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Thats true :D thanks:D (Big Grin) 
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Rybird Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Talent.
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cartoonistkev14 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this looks very amazing. I really like the color scheme and the bold red for the blood effect, now that's very neat. =D. Also The details are so smooth and detailed the subject just pops to life. Also I like the arrangement of the tools. This is really nice. Keep up the great work. =D
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much :hug: i'm glad you like it~
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cartoonistkev14 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem! And of course I like it. It's very well done. =D
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gtdrawing-leonardo Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Student General Artist
MAGNIFICO :)
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :D
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martinslag Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very nice
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :D
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yamiishiro Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:L I have that faber castell but B ouo,
Awesome job on this
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
i like the very thin ones :D
thanks~
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Ioana-V-Yuki Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
aww you're sketchbook drawings are gorgeous >u<
makes me want to pick up my sketchbook too lol

show more more~ <3when you can ofc haha
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
i have many many more but i didn't photograph them because of the bad weather (which makes bad lighting)
you should definitely! I never knew it was so fun drawing in a sketchbook now i never wanna stop, i haven't drawn digitally for a while OAO
at EECC i will bring my sketchbook so if you drop by we can look at eachother's sketchbooks :la:
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Ioana-V-Yuki Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
haha I understand very well the problem with the nasty weather xD I hope it will get better soon though ;u ;
I always end up drawing on my lectures notes instead hahaha ;u ; but yeah the freedom a sketchbook gives is awesome >u<

and omg that would be fun, only that I doubt I can make it there *cries**poorstudentotl*
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FitForAnAutopsy Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
a small skech?!

it's amazing....would take me for ever to draw it  ;0; 030
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
i just got faster because of practice :D i used to be very slow too, i think everyone starts slow and becomes faster as they practice more ^^
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chocolatefinatic1 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Love ur art! U are really talented!! :) 
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much! :love:
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VonRooz Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful! :)
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :D
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VonRooz Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :)
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12airabella12 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student General Artist
I USE THE SAME INKING PENS *SCREAMING*
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
haha cool! :D
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SeraphinaPitchiner Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Soooo beautiful!!! I love all the shading! Good job! Who shot her?
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Yuuza Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
first of all it's a guy, second he wasn't shot he was hit in the head with something, if he was shot he would be dead instantly but he's still alive, he might even survive who knows :)
and thank you :D
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SeraphinaPitchiner Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Whoopies. Sorries they looked like a girl to me. And it sorta looked like a shot. But I see it now ^_^
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Moziin Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student General Artist
...I wish I could draw like that on paper... guess I got to keep practicing! this is awesome another amazing work of art! :squee: 
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Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you! :D:D you have to draw on good paper not copy paper, then the pencil slides better and the eraser erases the lines better, you can have more tones and the over all quality of the artwork increases. I drew on copy paper all my life and there's a big difference when changing to good paper.
Aside from that there is practice of course :)
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Heartofwing Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Artist
really sad
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:hug:
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Tabitha-De-La-Kitty Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks great :)
I have the same Faber Castell Pen lol
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :love: really? they're pretty cool :D i especially like the very thin ones
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Tabitha-De-La-Kitty Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooooh yes :D the thin ones are so so so so good for fine lining
I used to use them all the time for my colour drawings but ever
since my pens ran out of ink I haven't really been colouring any
of my drawings. I kinda miss having colourful drawing books so
tomorrow I'm gonna get some more to colour and line with :)
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Yuuza Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
yea, when they run out of ink you just have to buy new ones, that's why they are cheaper than the ones you can replace the ink inside (i use to have a set like that but it was stolen one by one D:D: )
i wish i had more time to color my drawings too, i have such a wonderful set of colored pencils :love::love:
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Tabitha-De-La-Kitty Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm not really a fan of coloured pencils
I prefer pens and stuff  :)
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icecream234 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
great use of the materials and contrast. what kind of materials did you use?
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Yuuza Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
my sketchbook is Fabriano, an A5 version, pencil o.35 and 0.7 and red ink, you can see them in the photo, i didn't use black ink although it's in the photo, it's from when i used it on another sketch that i will post soon :D
and the contrast is just a little photoshop contrast, the white is also added in photoshop :D
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icecream234 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much :)

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Azareea Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really nicely done!! :D :la:
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank yuo so much dear :D:D
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Intimidator777 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice line work and attention to tonality. :) 
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:iconyuuza:
Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much :lovel:
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Intimidator777 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome :)Love 
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HorrorMGAfan19 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
how do you get an amazing picture
btw nice drawing its awesome :)

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Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!
i don't really understand the question :)
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HorrorMGAfan19 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
My question is how do you draw so well I've only started drawing anime since I was 11 so idk how u draw so good :3
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Yuuza Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
and for how many years have you been drawing? how often? a lot of times improvement comes from drawing a lot every day, not every weekend or every month. Sometimes even if someone draws every day a lot, the improvement comes slow, and that is because we draw what we know without trying to learn new hings, try new things. just like in school the teacher teaches a new lesson every week, the same has to be done to improve in art. It's the same principle. This week i try to draw water, next week i try to draw metal, next week i learn about human eyes, next week about trees etc. i think you get the picture.
But i think that with practice every day and with trying new things every week, anyone will improve. i personally don't believe in talent :) just in hard work
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HorrorMGAfan19 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thank u for the advice i'll try my hardest then keep up the amazing work :3
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ChihanaArisu Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
What a great piece of work Llama Emoji-03 (Sparkles) [V1] I love it Bunny Emoji-10 (Loved) [V1] Good luck with your challenge :excited: 
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